Friday, March 11, 2011

The Stranger - Excellence

This is part of my ongoing series on the Mahabharat, an epic poem of ancient India. For links to all previous Mahabharat posts go here. Or you can simply click on the Mahabharat page link above.


This is the fouth part of The Stranger series. Click for the first, second, and third parts.


Since Drona took over the official role of guru to the princes, the boys began to sleep in the school boarding house as they were meant to, going home only on holidays and special occasions.

Each day Drona let the boys have an hour of free time and usually they would grab a ball and run outside. Arjuna joined in - he loved to play games - but then one day he saw that as the princes were playing, Guru Drona was sitting with his son, Ashwathama, on the far side of the teacher's hut. They were both bent over a diagram that Drona was drawing on the ground.

Arjuna left the shouting and laughing princes and drifted over the field towards his teacher.

"What are you doing, Gurudev?"

Drona looked up as Arjuna drew closer. "I'm teaching Ashwathama a formula."

"May I learn it too?"

Drona looked at him in puzzlement. "Don't you want to play with the others, Arjuna?"

"Not when you're teaching."

Drona tilted his head as he studied Arjuna. "Then you may sit and learn this too." He shifted to make room for the prince and Arjuna sat down. "This," Drona told both boys, pointing to the complicated circular diagram he'd drawn in the dirt with a stick, "is called the chakravyu formation. It's a very difficult strategy of war and is in fact a military secret..."

That night Arjuna couldn't sleep. He kept thinking of all the things Drona had taught him that day and in the days before. Arjuna wanted to know everything Drona did. He wanted to be a great warrior because then Arjuna could protect his family and his nation. It was his duty to Hastinapur and to his brother Yudhistira who he knew was destined to be king.

As Arjuna lay in the dark thinking of these things he heard Bhima roll out of bed. Bhima crept out of the room and Arjuna listened, thinking his brother was going out to relieve himself. But after a few minutes Bhima did not return. Frowning, Arjuna got up and followed.

It was pitch dark in the boarding house and throughout the school grounds. Arjuna's eyesight had always been good at night but it was so dark he put his hands out in front of him and felt for the wall to guide him.

The hush of sleeping air was all around as he tried to figure out where Bhima had gone. Arjuna stopped and listened, straining for any sound.

There! A small, quiet scraping sound was coming from the direction of the kitchen.

Trust Bhima to be eating at this hour, Arjuna thought, suddenly grinning to himself.

Now that he knew where Bhima was Arjuna's steps were more confident as he walked through the dark. He came towards the kitchen but was surprised that there was no lamp lit. He couldn't hear anything either.

"Bhima?" Arjuna whispered.

There was a pause.

"Arjuna?" came a whisper back, the sound muffled as if his mouth was full.

Arjuna stepped inside. "Where are you?"

"Over here."

Straining to see in the dark, Arjuna made out the shadow that was Bhima sitting on the floor in the far corner. He haltingly went towards him. "What are you doing here so late?"

"I'm hungry."

Arjuna sat down beside Bhima on the cold stone floor. "But why are you eating in the dark?"

"Can't light a lamp. That would wake Gurudev."

That was true. Their mother Kunti had told them them that a perfect disciple never did anything that caused discomfort or unrest to the guru. Instead, a disciple should arise before the guru did and lay down only after the guru had gone to sleep and spend the whole day eager to fulfill the guru's instructions. That was how she had served her spiritual master and how she expected her sons to serve Guru Drona and Guru Kripa.

"Do you want some? It's the rice from earlier," Bhima said, magnanimously offering some of his precious food.

"No, thank you," Arjuna said.

They sat in the darkness as Bhima demolished the food before him.

"How are you doing that?" Arjuna finally whispered.

"Doing what?" Bhima said after gulping some water.

"Eating in the dark. How does your hand reach your mouth if you can't see anything?"

Bhima quietly chuckled. "It's called 'practice', little brother. Practice."

Arjuna was struck. "Practice..."

His belly full, Bhima stood up. "I'm tired now. Let's go to sleep."

"You go on," Arjuna said. "I'll be there soon." He felt Bhima shrug and turn to go.

Alone, Arjuna contemplated the idea of learning to do something in the dark. Practice, he thought. Practice is the key.

Quietly, he went back outside and over the playing ground to the arms shed. By feel, he found his bow and quiver and took them outside to the practice field, where there were round targets stuffed tightly with hay.

Since he couldn't see anything he calculated the distance by counting footsteps. He set an arrow on his bow and took aim. He missed the first couple of shots, straining in the dark to see the target. Then he decided to close his eyes and see with his mind.

His next shot hit hay. He went up to it and felt around to see how accurate he'd been. It was pretty close to the center.

He counted his footsteps back again and continued. The small hours of the night came and trickled away.

An hour before dawn, Drona came into the courtyard and spotted Arjuna shooting at the target in the faintest of pre-dawn light. "What are you doing?"

Arjuna jumped. He turned, looking stricken. "I'm sorry to wake you, Gurudev. Please forgive me." He shouldered his weapon and bowed with his palms folded.

Drona walked up to him, his muscled body huge and shadowed in the pre-dawn air. "You didn't wake me, son. But what are you doing? Why are you out here?"

Arjuna lifted his quiver that was nearly empty. Then he squared his shoulders and confessed. "I'm practicing my archery."

Drona shook his head. "But why in the dark of night? You can do your shooting during the day."

"Brother Bhima told me that if I practiced enough, I could have perfect aim even in the dark."

Drona stood in silence as he absorbed Arjuna's words. He looked from Arjuna to the target that was slowly becoming more visible as the light crept over the horizon. Arrows were embedded in it's thick body.

"You have a quality within you," Drona suddenly said, "that my other disciples have not. You have excellence." A slight smile marked his mouth as he looked back down at Arjuna. "Do not doubt it, son. You will be a great archer. In fact, I promise you here and now that I will make you the greatest archer in the world."

Arjuna's lips parted in surprised. "You will?"

"Oh yes. I've been planning on it. Now I'm determined. You will be the greatest archer this world has ever seen."

Arjuna bowed his head again, humbled by his teacher's faith in him. "Thank you, Gurudev."


Arjuna wasn't like the other students in his school because he didn't just accept what he was given. He wanted more. He was thirsty for knowledge. He capitalised on every opportunity to learn. He even created his own lessons. He moved from good to excellent because he pushed himself to heights the others did not.

Raw talent is always a good start but excellence comes from dedication. And hard work. And endless practice.

If you want to be good at something, you should be determined to be good at it in all conditions. In the light and in the dark. In good weather and in bad. With the right equiptment or with nothing but what you can put together in a makeshift fashion.

Whether you're a writer, an athlete, a mathematician, a soldier, a businessman, a housekeeper, a farm worker, a sailor, a politician, a carpenter - practice and dedication are the keys to excellence in your field.

I'm always amused when I hear of cooks who are celebrated in high circles but still have to taste their food as they cook it. A truly good cook never needs to taste his food because he KNOWS how it tastes already. In his mind he has already calculated the distances, and measured the factors. He is Arjuna, shooting in the dark and hitting his target every time. My mother is a cook like that. She never tastes her food before serving it and yet it's always perfect. This is because she has excellence.

Are you excellent at what you do? Do you need to taste your own cooking? Do you write something and post it on your blog utterly sure of it's power to reach others? Do you complete a day's work and know that everything you did in that day was correct?

Do you always hit your mark?

If not then you know the answer. Be dedicated. Be determined. And practice.


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here for the last Mahabharat post entitled The Stranger - Crocodile in the Water.

Click here for the next Mahabharat post entitled The Stranger - Unknown Disciple.

26 comments:

Rachna Chhabria said...

Jai..I just loved this amazing post. Arjuna is one of my favourite characters, for his dedication and determination which I badly need to emulate. I was not ware of this scene from the Mahabharat. Thanks for this outstanding post.

On another note I need to confess that I am one of those who need to taste their food, my confidence while cooking is not very high. My mother is like yours, she never tastes and yet her food is perfect.

Lydia K said...

I am never that confident in my potential perfection. Sometimes, but it only last moments before doubt creeps in.

Just wanted to say that your dialogue is really crisp. You cut away all the fat and distill it to its best. Wonderful.

Lola Sharp said...

I enjoyed this greatly, Jai. "The hush of sleeping air..." is sublime.

And NO, I do not always hit my mark.
(Sometimes I don't even have a mark ;)

Have a lovely weekend, Jai.
Hugs,
Lola

Vaishnavi Nair said...

I love this story - I've heard it so many times, but your expression makes me want to become excellent. Thank you.

Posts o Arjun please? :) I hope he has some failings... that'd make him human. Trying to emulate and glorify him in my head needs to be curbed too I think.

Good weekend, Jai!

Clarissa Draper said...

Oh, I remember this series. Someday when I'm in a better frame of mind, I'm going to look at it more thoroughly.

Dorothy P said...

Jai: Your writing gets better and better. Oh, that I could create the atmosphere, tension and intense feeling that you instil in your stories. I have a lot to learn from you. And I'm going to keep on practising, This is a great story.

Hannah Kincade said...

Practice is key in most things, especially writing. It makes me think of those authors who's books get worse as they go along, after being published. I think it has to do with losing touch with the fundamentals and the pressure to just keep producing and producing. They don't get enough time to practice and enjoy the art.

Great post as always!

Robert Guthrie said...

"...perfect aim, even in the dark..." Beautiful. Is that what we're shooting for?

Jai Joshi said...

Rachna, I'm not as good as my mother is but I still never taste my cooking. If I taste it then I feel like that's taking the easy way out. I'd rather practice and learn and be good enough never to have to worry about whether my food tastes good.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Lydia, thanks for your comment on my dialogue. I'm glad my hard work is paying off!

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Lola, thanks. Every so often it's ok not to have a mark but for me, most days, I need to know what I'm shooting for.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Vaishnavi, Arjuna certainly had faults. Everyone has faults. But he was a little more perfect that everyone else too. Don't forget that he was Draupadi's husband and Krishna's friend. Not just any ordinary person with a million bad habits was going to achieve that state of joy. And it's not like he just got lucky either. Everything he was born with were qualities that he'd worked for in previous lives.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Clarissa, thank you. I hope you get time.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Dorothy, I'm always telling myself that I need to practice, that I don't practice enough. I'm just trying my best like you are but thank you so much for your appreciation. Your words spur me on and give me motivation to keep going.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Hannah, I agree that there is something very worrying about writers who get worse, not better, the more they publish. I do think that a certain element of laziness comes in, or maybe it's pressure as you say, or maybe it's even just tiredness.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Robert, I know that's what I shoot for always I don't always hit my mark.

Jai

Donna Hole said...

A wonderful teaching excerpt. Such good voice and flow from one scene to the next.

.......dhole

A Cuban In London said...

I think that most of us shoot in the dark at some point in our lives, but maybe regret missing the target at first. So, we stop doing it. The world belongs to those who persevere.

Great tale. Many thanks.

Greetings from London.

Talli Roland said...

Fantastic story, Jai. I loved your dialogue, too!

Lynda R Young said...

great story,..and great advice to writers too. It's soemthing I need to be reminded of at the moment because I seem to be in a rush.

Jai Joshi said...

Donna, thanks! I'm glad my hard word paid off.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Cuban, that's a great word, perseverance.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Talli, I love writing dialogue. It's always fun to get into the flow of a character's speech.

Jai

Jai Joshi said...

Lynda, I'm always tellling myself that quality is better than quantity. So what if something takes me longer to do? I'd rather get it right and of excellent quality than produce something substandard, even if it is quick.

Jai

Hema P. said...

Perseverance -- a wonderful take away from this story, Jai! Thanks for bringing it to life in such simple and immediate words.

Jai Joshi said...

Hema, thank you!

Jai